I thought he was the one for me.
He showed me loved then played with my dreams.
My heart just knew he was the one.
Then he became evil like a loaded shotgun.
He got what he wanted down my pants.
Then never retuned my calls or even when I called him back.
What such a jerk to for me to kill me emotions. For
I need a cure.
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JackReed3
A contest entry
- What Eyes? Quickie. by as.phy.xi.ate..
600 points, ended November 9, 12 entries
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Hmmm...universal topic me thinks. One many of us can relate to.
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speaking from the mind of a women,
beautiful sad and very true words!!
love and blessings
R~
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He showed me loved then played with my dreams? It should be, he showed me LOVE and played with my dreams. I've been through this, a few times actually. I don't see the pain, I mean I have felt that horrible, sick, unworthy feeling because of being used. You seem to not show it at all..
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>[ Want I should I kill him?
Great write sad that its SO often the truth. Good Job, Good luck
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Nicely done Jack of Hearts
good luck in the contest
Passionspromise
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