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Unlove You...

No matter how hard I try, its true.
I cannot do it, I can't unlove you.
I cannot distil, the beatings of my heart.
Theses feelings deep inside, of which you're a part.

You're embedded in my mind, deeper than the sea.
Engraved on my heart, how can I forget thee?
I will not, I cannot, till eternity's shore....
Your footprint will remain, on my heart evermore.


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  • paul claxton
    November 10
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    you write so beautifully,well done


  • Lulu Gee silver member
    November 9

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    Ooooohhhhh I love your sentiments here, words I would love to speak, I think I'll practice them..hahahha!
    A lovely poem, one I enjoyed reading very much as I'm a romantic through and through.
    Lu x
    ps...don't forget the clappies ...hahah!

    • dreamofolwin
      November 9
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      Thanks so much LuLu.... I found the clappies! haha , Lol. Im a romantic too. Take care !


  • Bluemonday silver member
    November 8

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    I cant unlove you...What a wonderful title to an unusual poem as the title suggests. You're embedded in my mind, deeper than the sea.
    lovely, a wonderful sentiment...Dan

    • dreamofolwin
      November 9
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      Thanks so much for the comment... Kenny Rodgers song "Can't Unlove You.." gave me the inspiration for this piece


  • Kendal Palmer gold member
    November 8

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    so much truth inside this piece. I really like how well you articulated these thoughts. Good luck! Thank you for sharing. Keep up the great work.
    Peace & light,
    Kendal

    • dreamofolwin
      November 9
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      Thanku! I will make sure to read/comment on yours also... All the best!

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