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Birdsong

Have you ever seen a bird that would not fly?
What defines his dreams if he refuses the sky?
Grounded, his ambition is shadowed by his pain.
No joy, darkened sun, and lost in eternal rain .

...He was born to soar, being free to take to the skies,.
Attop a mountain, spanwings back,tears blind his eyes ... ~

The truth of his destiny is close in his sight.
Letting go, the longing sovereignty is found in his flight.
Inhibitions abandoned, his stifling trepidation now gone.
Freedom is felt, for true beauty inspired this bird’s song.

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