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eternity's breath
daylight passageway homeward
gathering of souls

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Rainbow picture is the prompt found here: http://allpoetry.com/contest/2466089

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  • Swan song gold member
    November 21
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    kind of a universal feel to this but I like it!


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    November 9

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    wow you have certainly said so much about the picture. You have delved most deeply and written a Haiku of beauty and elegance. Best wishes in this contest


  • mgmc gold member
    November 8
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    Breathtaking! Just amazingly well written! I'm awed! Best of luck with contest!