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a moment in time

has it occurred to you

all our prayers are to father time,

hold it back, slow it down-

then what?

 

is death such a natural disease

 

life so much fuller 

when you see an end to it

 

for all the idioms

for all the centuries

we spend time on petulance

disregard beauty

 

those small wonders

 

and are we joyous?

 

there is flavor in a stormcloud

mixed with freshness, new grass

and a garden's seasonal blooms

 

texture in moonlight,

grainy suns with spots of color,

more vivid than a starlit night

 

why are they not important to us

how do they pale in insignificance

when all around we hold onto sadness,

watch misery and feel helpless

 

then there is your face,

one i tell myself lights my days

this is consummate; all there is

 

sometimes

the unbearable weight of being

shows me this is enough

 

Ya think?

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  • Mairi bheag gold member
    November 8
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    Wow.


  • Nature Song silver member
    November 8

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    Your pulpit grows even more stonger with each passing line here my friend in this poem. Sadly as we grow older the more we apprechiate life, than we did in the beginning, as our time draws nearer, but for some the sadness never fades...even at their end.

    This poem holds so much truth to what life should really be!

    ~Sie


  • michael thomas
    November 8

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    Sheilia? First I saw your name I type it with your permission?
    Is being lighter from your making it so by your permission in words? I feel so. Thank you for lovely thoughts.

    michael


    • Cannonsfire
      November 8
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      lol Oh Michael my name is Chez, 'sheila' is an aussie slang term for a woman lol I only allow Bug to do it

  • Hey, sheilia, I love this.... what an amazing perspective... spend our time fusing over what matters...what a novel idea huh...just enjoy life? Gosh, there is wisdom here. A wonderfu poet's eye...and a personal connection at the end too, which plays out so nicely.

    • Cannonsfire
      November 8
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      Thanks Bug, I have had some time to muse over this in conversations lol thought it was time to write about it C

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