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Tropical Blues

I sit under the sun
Drinking strawberry margaritas
Umbrellas in my drink
I’m examining las sexy chicas

They look like candy
And must taste like cherry lollipop
And they’re inviting me
To have fun with them on the rock

They give me crowns
Like those that Caesar wore
Treated like a God
They beg me for more

Then my teacher says
With a dictator’s smirk
"Wake up, sleeping beauty
And get your lazy ass back to work!"

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