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The Bridge

An electric link

between mortals and heavens

the bright flash of wisdom.

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  • Swan song gold member
    November 21
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    I like where you went with this poem very nicely done thank you for your entry line two in my opinion was exceptionaly strong


  • hawkeslake gold member
    November 9

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    This is very striking. And for me a fresh image. Well-done! Lita