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A letter for the line.

Hello.
Attention please.
Time again for
Everyone's favorite fuckup.

Might as well start this up.
Entertainment at it's best.

Again I`ll bow for you.
Not a string will show as I
Dance over the stage; 'Scene 3 / Act - Disaster '.

Bully me over with your calloused hands.
Reach into my chest and pull out
Everything that ever made up the walls
And take away my sanity;
Keep it in your pocket always.

Might as well cut these strings and drop away.
Even I know when a show can't go on anymore.

Don't look at me that way.
Only my reflection has that right anymore.
Without you here, things`ll be the same again.
Never will I let another climb the hills of my insanity.

Once more, c`mon baby.
Not only do I still love you, but it's an
Entirely endless emotion.

Might I create a little bit of magic?
Operate on this petty mind of mine
Realize the darkness is only inside my heart
Each and every flicker of dawn's light.

Tell me again how much you love me,
I promise not to regret falling for those lines.
Maybe I`ll even come to understand that
Every time you ever said them, they were lies.

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Pay attention to the first letter of each line, yea?

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  • Montey silver member
    2 days ago
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    Wow,what a really clever and heartfelt poem.I love the imagary you createand I really liked the line "don't look at me that way, only my reflection has the right to do that"I'm glad you drew my attention to the first letters 'cos I would otherwise have missed it.This was the icing on the cake and just added to the cleverness of the poem.Montey