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One Horse Limo

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I seen it with my own two eyes
Right there under bright blue skies
I thought I’d lost my mind right then
I had to stop and look again

Took off my hat and scratched my head
I wondered how that thing was bred
Maybe they stretched it with a truck
I had to say my brain was stuck

An optical illusion, it had to be
Or a terrible trick being played on me
I couldn’t believe that thing was real
So I walked over to have a feel

I dang near jumped when I touched its hide
Then kids ran up for a crazy ride
I’ll tell this story again and again
About the one horse limo that seated ten

 

 

 

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  • darlee77 gold member
    2 days ago
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    This is just toooo cute, but not tooooo loooonnggg. I love it. You shore do have a vivid imagination. Very good.


  • Aiswarya T Anish
    November 10
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    Cool poetry. It was witty, and oh!!!! sooo sweet. Hw I wish I could see that horse limo myself. You have a beautiful imagination!

    Aishu


  • ea silver member
    November 9

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    I'd like to hear this one again
    about the horse that seated ten!

    Congrats on the gold, cowboy!

  • suecat
    November 9

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    Congratulations on your win! I stared at this photo for ages and all I could think of was that maybe it was a lo-o-o-ng shot for the next Melbourne Cup...o dear.
    A great poem!


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    November 8

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    congrats on the gold a worthy piece made me smile hun hugs always Angel♥


  • Ez Writer silver member
    November 8

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    This is one really funny poem !
    Luv where you took the prompt .
    Thank you for entering ! Easy

    • An Old Codger gold member
      November 8
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      Thank ya sir for feeling this piece was worthy of Gold and for hosting. I'm glad you could get a laugh from this.

  • mcheadle
    November 8
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    Very good sir,

    I'm laughing at this one for sure...mac


  • Lulu Gee silver member
    November 8
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    I love your funnies!
    And this is funny, how do they do that?
    Good luck ...Lulu

    • An Old Codger gold member
      November 8
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      Thanks my friend, glad this gave you a chuckle. As for how do they do that.......it's either magic or a government conspiracy.


  • Poetic-Theorem silver member
    November 8

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    LMAO
    Wonderful humor Sir! As always your rhyme and flow is awesome..brilliant take on the prompt..very original..wish you the best..David

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