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I Live

I have no real love
Only dreams of despair,
Why is my body?
A different mind guiltier,
Raped of no love,
Ravaged and tortured.
Pledged into loss,
Deliberating my toll,
I await the end.
To be reborn true,
Within a soul
Right and fulfilled.
My loss incomplete,
My future never sure,
I have no real love.
Never to be rebuilt.
Not able to show myself,
Misshapen in reality,
Misshapen in death,
I have no real love
Much to give
A life I live.

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