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I Am Dead on the Inside

I am dead to the world

I am dead on the inside

But am I dead to you

I am dead to myself

I feel as tho I am nothing

I am but a pitiful piece of dirt

I need help but can't get help

I sit in my corner and die little at a time on the inside

I feel as tho I am dead already

I am dead on the inside!

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