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Athena (Haiku)


Athena
the goddess of the arts
spills her palette


Author notes

According to Greek mythology, Athena is the godess of wisdom, war, the arts, industry, justice and skill. However, occasionally she can be clumsy and spills her palette while painting, for which we should be thankful.

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  • Swan song gold member
    November 21
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    even thouigh this has a little mythology in it and some so called haiku experts would say that is a no no I feel you had an excellent delivery and enjoyed this haiku thank you for entering

  • Macsword
    November 9
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    Exactly

    Poet, your history and words serve you well.


  • azure85 gold member
    November 8

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    Very pretty haiku and I love the Greek references for the basis of your haiku. An excellent take on the prompt, I enjoyed reading your haiku! Good luck in the contest.