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I don't like your Attitude!

What the hell is wrong with us
First few months were perfect
Than something happened we cant discuss
And since then all it sounds like I do is disrespect
No matter what I do
You can't just be happy for the fact your with me
Instead when you are I feel apologies are long-overdue
Even for things that I can't foresee.

I am a piece of sh1t
But i'd never think to cheat
All I ask are simple favors
Yet you make it to have so many layers
I don't know what you want from me
But you honestly need to ask yourself
::What do I want::
Because its your decision.
I've never had a part in it.

Please tell me what you think

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