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The matches are too soggy in my brain
and I can’t strike up a conversation
so let me dry here by the fire
while the kindling burns
down into coals
of warm-blooded words
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Author notes
Letter One & Two (though most of the others would do as well)
Image: http://winklepickers.deviantart.com/art/Cassis-119696137
Comments
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yep.
this spirals out and down and ends abruptly but not unpleasantly. I like the brevity where at other times I would have whined that it was just too short. There doesnt seem to be anything left to say after you're finished. A poet worht the read should know when enough is enough.
this is enough
love,
jin -
very nice
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Ahhh, Hell. What's wrong with bein' quiet once in awhile? Occupational hazard ya know, Madame Liberryan. But yeah,
I hear ya, even in the silence. Good luck in Jin's contest, Karen.
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