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Hurt

Hurt that's all I seem to be able to do

Hurt is all i ever do to you

Hurt is why I want to die

Hurt is what I never wanted to do

Why do I hurt you so much I don't know

Why do I do what I do I don't know

I grab my blades to end this hurting

I press down on my skin with the blades

I watch as the blood spills out of me

I am losing all my blood so I can't feel this hurt anymore

My blood is almost gone and I can't feel anything anymore

I am dead !

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