I walk in the rain,
so no one can see my pain.
I walk with thoughts of tomorrow,
where there will be more sorrow.
I walk with these thoughts, my mind full of dread.
I walk with these thoughts, wishing they were dead.
As tears start to stream,
nothing is as it seems.
People around me say they care,
but around me they could no longer bare.
If only they could see my fear,
but still would they stay here?
I drop to my knees and scream,
nothing is as it seems!
well?
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interesting
usually not a fan of rhyme but here it works soooo well
lots of emotion
very very well written
(applauding to follow)
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really good - hope its not autobiographical
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This was powerful, I enjoyed reading it. I also loved your style. I almost was putting a tune to it as I read. Feel better, hun. :]
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