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Plaza de Armas





Many times I imagined I was in 
a vibrant watercolour painting.

If I closed my eyes,
let the sun
d
r
i
p
warm egg yolk rays
on my face,
sat long enough
on a plaza bench,
I almost felt
two-dimensional
and might just blend
into this foreign landscape.

It was a nice thought,
one I told
to the Peruvian boy
at my side
who laughed
and closed his eyes too.















.

Author notes

plaza de armas: government square

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Comments

  • Rowan gold member
    November 8

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    I want to just sit beside you and close my eyes too...
    loved the yolk imagery.


  • aeolia
    November 8

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    you are back!! seriously, i think both this poem and your return have made my week.


  • swim.x
    November 8

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    this is great.
    bookmarked.
    gosh i've missed your work.
    idea: write more often!