Your eyes, a mystery
like ships that went down
Lost, deep beneath the sea
in your eyes I will drown
As I kneel before your beauty
tender kisses on your hand
I pull you slowly to me
making angels in the sand
I inhale your essence
close my eyes and take you in
My body arches beneath your presence
and the tides begin
Riding waves of emotion
I am lost at sea
My ship I show devotion
your eyes, a mystery
We've shared our maiden journey
on ships not yet found
Your eyes, a mystery
my love for you is bound
A contest entry
- Sensuality In Rhyme by Frodofan.
575 points, ended November 23, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I enjoyed it.
I like the comparisons of your love to the ocean. And the rhythm is very nice. I wondered if it was some specific form with the repetition of "your eyes, a mystery?" Thanks for taking the time to enter.
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Your eyes,a mystery
When I went to your contest and your picture was there i looked into your eyes and thought I could drown in them like the mystery of the deep blue sea
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