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"This is me letting you go."

A look into the Past

The vibrant excitement of a life now cold

In world so new, I found you

You the reason for me rising to the new day

You the focus of all my Passion

You my black rose in a garden full of weeds

But thorns you did have, cutting me worse than any blade could

Now i look into the past and i realize to myself

  "This is me letting you go."





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  • IrishGypsyRose
    November 8, 2009

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    Nice flow and great metaphors. It was a sad read, but one I could very much relate to. I appreciate you entering my contest, best of luck. ~gypsy~