The moonlight dances upon the cool waters,
As my eyes drink in the quiet kisses of rain drops.
Upon the immaculate unbroken surfaces of the dark waters
Like little waves in a big ocean, the quiet kisses coalesce;
Growing outwards, rippling like little feet in big puddles.
Innocent smiles and smiling eyes echo in my mind.
These days, these months, these years;
They seem so far away, yet I can feel them.
I need to change this day to day,
Before I get fed to this day to day.
Ground down by the gears of modern life,
Swallowed by the doors of a nine-to-five.
They say wounds heal, given time,
Yet they seem to have stuck with me.
Sometimes I wonder where I have gone.
On occasion these thoughts make me wonder;
Maybe these wounds aren't stuck on me,
For sometimes my thoughts make me wander.
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I loved this. i can really relate.
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I love this!!!
I can totally relate
great write♥
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This is really good. One of your best, i would have to say.
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Very good mate !
The world sucks , and we don't really seem to have the ability to change anything ... We just take the beatings that are dished out , and if we don't keep some sort of defense against it , We can snap ...
In the end it seems , we can only live in our memories ...
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Ground down by the gears of modern life,
Swallowed by the doors of a nine-to-five.
They say wounds heal, given time.
Yet they seem to have stuck with me,
Sometimes I wonder where I have gone.
I like : )
and the title too
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this was so beautiful! i particularly enjoyed the first stanza. your a really good writer.
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Thanks for the read. I'm glad you liked it.
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i really like this. it captures exactly how i feel today...thinking a lot about my past, great timing.
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