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walked over

eugene,

lethargic waves tug at my conscious mind after twelve hours of sleep...an hour of life seeping into over-saturated pores.

my lips could rival the Sahara in a race of dry desolation. I could blame the lack of chap stick or the radio that doesn't play songs worth a damn anymore. truth is I'm scared that I wouldn't recognize my own voice.

in between my trips to the kitchen for coffee, and my imaginary self image; a cool artsy kid who reads intelligent books and cares about the world, I had a point.

I don't wear shorts in the summer anymore. because when we fuck, you grab too hard. and I hate the finger sized bruises you leave on my thighs. and no matter how many times I tell you, it's like you don't hear me.


so, I'll sit quietly in the corner and forget songs that I used to know...

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might edit. not sure if I'm happy with it quite yet.

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  • Night Hope gold member
    November 8

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    The line about him not hearin' you. Make him listen. Or stop fuckin' the rough bastard until and unless he does, Sweetie.


  • Sara Khan
    November 8

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    Interesting...I very much enjoyed the fourth paragraph
    "I don't wear shorts in the summer anymore....."


  • Laura Lamarca gold member
    November 8

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    Welcome back to ink.

    enjoyed immensely.


    laura.