Sympathy and tenderness are always in
Your embrace
Making me love you more and more each day
Precious love we have, you and I
And I adore you for loving my son as if he was your very own
Time has been on our side, keeping us together through the
Harshest times and the cruelest hours
You truely are my one and only soulmate
Absolute trust we have together
Nothing can tear us apart, nothing can
Destroy our love that we have
Together we are one
Each and every day as precious as the
Next one. My
Dearest love
Everything that ever hurt us in our past will
Run away forever because of our love for each other
Never again will anyone
Ever make us break away, for we are
Soulmates, always and forever
Separate us? Never again!
Author notes
at least three words acrostic, one of which has to be an emotion
also inspired from the song:
"Sympathy, Tenderness" from the broadway show "Jekyll/Hyde"
this is also my first acrostic! ;0)
A contest entry
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Comments
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Together we are one
Each and every day as precious as the
Next one. My
Dearest love
I REALLY like this part.
amazing write. thanks for entering. -
As an acrostic lover and a doting wife and mother, I appreciate this piece greatly. I found it to be both touching and inspiring. You did a fantastic job here. ~gypsy~
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You did an awesome job with this piece. Love always brings out the most beautiful writes, that is for sure. I only wish I could find that love. Great job, thanks for entering my contest.
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thanks so much for your comment! to be honest, this was my first acrostic so i was a bit nervous. i'm so very glad that you liked it. you're right....love does bring out the most beautiful writes.
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