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Chapel

Maybe inside some cold New England chapel
I remember everything as white except
the pulpit trim and the plowed snow visible through
a large wall of glass. The sermon was tolerant and wise 
but the wind picked up, the weather got bad and
everyone left as soon as he was done.

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  • neurosine gold member
    November 9

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    Good contrast. Mystery form. Also, I wonder if this even happened. If so, it could have happened in New England. Often their chapels are cold and dank.


    • bobanonymous gold member
      November 10
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      Often their chapels are cold and dank.

      Only during the week, they heat them on the weekend