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Broken Wings Of An Angel...

I remember I use to sky high before
You came into my life now
That I've met you
I can't take you off my lonely mind
Lullabies & goodbyes
Make me cry every-time
You come to mind
I miss you more and
Every day that passes
Why did you go and die?

Leo it's been years since I seen your beautiful furry face
I wish you were still with me tonight
My precious angel I adore you & forever will
I hope you know I think about you every day and
Sleep with your blanket at night

Hoping you will come back some day but
I know that's all a lie or
All inside my head...
I still remember when
I was a little girl you were
Just my imagnation and
Then mommy decided to get a dog and
That's when you came and
I called you "Leo"

I miss you...
I will never forget the memories we shared together
You'll always be in my heart but
I know you're in a better place now...

Author notes

this is to my dog Leo. I miss you so much! why did you die I wish you were still here in my arms....I will never forget you!

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  • TinyGrasshopper gold member
    November 26
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    *sniff*

    Aww man that's so sad... A dog can be as much a companion and friend as a person can and in some ways more so... The innocence and trust that a pet shows you is so honest and pure and you sum that up so well in your soliloquy... Unless it's like my terrapins and tries to savage you when you hold them :/ I love the last line the most... "You'll always be in my heart but I know you're in a better place now..." It's so selfless and mature to let go knowing that while it may make you sad... you know that your friend is happy.


    • XXWolfOfInsanityxX
      November 26
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      Thank you so much for your kind words Ben. I really do miss Leo. Yes honesty and trust is what a good pet shows. I had a strong bond with him as a little girl. Now that he's gone I sometimes feel alone. Thank you for your kind words. I am glad you like my write and that it touched your heart in a way.

  • MoonlightStars gold member
    November 13
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    Awww, such powerful word choices. beautiful

  • that's sad I'm so sorry, I love dogs, I hope you get better soon


  • MoreTears2Fall
    November 8

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    Aww this is so sad. I'm a sucker for sad dog poems and stories. It almost brought me to tears. This is great you show so much love for your dog Leo in this. It's beautiful. I had my dog die a couple years back, but my dog will always remain in my thoughts and memories like Leo will in yours. Great Poem.

    • Awe thank you so much for your kind words. I am sorry to hear about your dog. Leo is forever in my memories and yes I do miss him a lot.


  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    November 8

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    Awwh. I remember when my dog Max died I was so sad I'm here for you my friend. I will never forget Max just like you will never for get Leo. I miss my dog



    -Steve-

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