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There was a time
When no one was there
When it wasn't fine
My happiness was rare
All I wanted was someone to care

I was waiting for a miracle
I didn't realize
I already had it
This thing can't materialize
Except in my mind

It seemed, my blade was my only friend
A harmless release
The only thing I could depend
But I promised to cease
I needed to find inner peace

I was waiting for a miracle
I didn't realize
I already had it
This thing can't materialize
Except in my mind

Music has saved me
Kept me sane
The melodies set me free
Made me believe, in dreams
Everything is how it should be

(Bridge)
My demons I can now release
I have found peace
In my melodies
My dreams

I was waiting for a miracle
I didn't realize
I already had it
This thing can't materialize
Except in my mind

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    November 8

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    Humm your imagination in the last stanza is very obvious and very true to the thought you conceived as well..but even then the work you crafted is wonderfully presented..well done..