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Slacker

I have a folding chair
On the patio of my apartment
Next to some plastic plants
That I do not have to water
It is on the third floor

I like to get up early
And brew some coffee
That is stronger than my ambition
Half a teaspoon will do
I take a book and go out on the porch
And drown myself in the sunshine

Occasionally
I will look up from my reading
At the busy road that passes by my world

I see all the people
Who are being beaten to death by the rapids
The ones rushing over the falls
While I stand on the banks and watch
I smile in bemusement

Now excuse me while I rush
Into the kitchen
For another cup of coffee

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    November 9

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    welcome to all poetry

    I like the tying up of the coffee, but I especially love the small details that make this stand out unique...good write you have here


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