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For Tabby, who prefers 'Tabi.'

I don't know why I've never
Called you by the name you've chosen
Perhaps the old one brings back times
We sat knee to knee, supposing
I always meant to do it...
(Which is feeble, I concede)
I am well enough to mean well
Not quite well enough in deed.
Hamlet's 'indifferent-honest.'
Still a far cry from being good
When I do the things I can for you,
And little of what I should.
You would have all love lavished on you
If my mouth said what it meant
And if only my hands' actions
Could match my heart's intent.

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  • Barry Hodges silver member
    2 days ago
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    Whimsy is not dead! It liveth in Exeter and its environs, methinks (to quote the old fart from poetry shared) 'tis a far far better thing than many others have writ (I think I'm going all archaic). Verily.