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Never Again

never again
will i fall and be played
never again
will the queen of hearts be my trade

never again
will i let my heart falll astray
my love is for him
the one who never tried to play

that damn card of a joker
which plays me every time
the card that plays with my heart
then junks me and every feeling thats mine

i hate that stupid bastard
the bastards  that did this to me
i wish my heart wasn't so locked up
and i could love with a love that was free

but i've learned my lesson
cause now this "bitch" has got a new bite
i'm no longer gonna sit and fall into loves trap
i'm gonna love the one who truly loves me, i'm gonna put up a fight

watch as i turn from the gurl who's been played
to a gurl who's no longer gonna be a toy
i'm in love with one person
and hes the good lover boy

i don't need to settle for anyone else
because my lover is true to me
i know now i don't need to settle or worry about some old flame
becasue its MY man who is what makes me truely free.

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  • nikoshiana
    November 9
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    sounds like a song this. like it

  • Yay!!!

    I'm so Happy for you hunny!! Don't settle, never settel, your worth too much to settle for anything less that what makes you happy!!


  • Veronica-Armijo
    November 8
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    Don't ever settle for anything but the best! I think this is a wonderful piece.

  • Humm..the struggle in the life and in the love are the most obvious turns and one can't control it..buy taking the steps to setle are the steps which I SEE IN THIS POETRY..WELL DONE..