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Where Am I

Where am I?
I've been searching for myself
I had thought I had found myself
The first time ever
I was in there
Connected, moving, feeling freedom
Then bam!
I was lost...
More lost than I have been for years

Tripping, tripping hard
Slammed to the ground
Slammed hard...

Where am I?
Someone please tell me
Show me - I am lost
Drowning, sinking
Someone Please grab my hand
Show me you care
Someone please!

Don't want to go down alone,
Don't want to go down at all
Oh my angels come assist
I no longer want to be adrift
I call on you, Please!
Give me a key...
The key to me

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  • Mountain Woman gold member
    November 8
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    Great job. I love the last lines -
    Give me a key...
    The key to me

    Very emotional poem.
    Keep them coming...

    M


    • ledan72poet
      November 8
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      Thank you

      This is an old write, I went back through it and changed it a bit.