so many times
I reached out
cause I BELIEVED
you/i/us/we
were REAL
like the endless seas
singing ecstasy
blessed amongst
soft ever blues
skies beaming...
when
I found the courage
to ask...
was it time...for us
you answered
YOUR TRUTH
so I waited...
took many deep
breaths...
and waited...again
till finally
I dared let go
allowing the flow...
bathed in the glow
our love now saunters
in a soft kind of
empty quietness
still simmering...
MANY blessings
to you
always in
ALL WAYS-
I love you!!
fare-thee-well
my sweet
nothingness...
till we meet
again…
Author notes
DEDICATED to G.O.D., so much I've still to learn, and graciously glowing and growing I am!!!...this poem is very personal and it's also very universal....always filled with L.O.V.E.
are you in the glow?
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I wonderful feeling of tranquility and safety is felt reading this poem.
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This phrase is so comforting, it makes us want to go there:
'allowing the flow...
bathed in the glow'
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Beautiful piece. Also seems sad. And as you said, seems very personal. How come it seems that our best works stem from our deepest truths. As always love reading your work. Hope all is well. - cgirl0410
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oh how beautiful! It's so wonderful to have a relationship with a wonderful God.
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Yes....
Yesssss...how precious it is! Thank you so much for taking the time to read and respond. Peace and many Joyful blessings to you.
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lovely line breaks
a great dedication, even if it can be seen in all the lights of love
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thank you so much
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and respond...glad you enjoyed it. Peace and many Joyful blessings to you!
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I would have preferred this to be simply a love poem. You included it in spirituality too. As a love poem, it is very good. I could relate with it.
Victor -
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YOU are on target...
Yes...you are on target! This IS most certainly...a love poem. Thanks for taking the time to read and respond...peace & joyful blessings
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