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I Always Needed Somebody

I always needed somebody to tell me it would be okay.
They never came.
I always needed  somebody to cry on.
They never came.
I waited for the sunrise,
it never came.
I waited for you.
You never came.

So tonight I'm going to let it go.

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  • Grey.Area.
    November 8

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    This is awesome, was trying to find part to quote as my favourite but it is all awesome.

    I like how short sweet and to the point it is.

    But picking a part, my favourite is:

    'I always needed somebody to cry on.
    They never came.
    I waited for the sunrise,
    it never came. '

    This is amazing. It is intense and makes me feel and makes me relate.
    I only wish there was more to read.

    Good Job.

    Louise.