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Jealousy of a Skeleton

I see her then
The walking skeleton
Her ribs like piano keys
Playing a soft song as she breathes

He spine crawling up her back
A visible support beam
Holding up her body ever so frail
This is one girl who refuses to fail

Others look on
Most with pity and concern
Her disorder a living legacy
While I look on, with nothing more than jealousy

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