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Forbidden

You should be
Forbidden.
Wait,
You already are.
The fruit I cannot have-
Being tempted into a taste
I could never take.

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  • Sweet-Pea7
    November 8

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    Oh. My. Goodness. This is so short, but I just had a mini freak out over it in my head. Its amazing! And just... I don't know. Gah! It's completely and utterly perfect!


  • MacyDawn
    November 7

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    Whoa, this is amazing!
    The forbidden fruit doesn't always taste the sweetest (Twilight, haha)
    But seriously, it's good.
    It's very concise (I threw in a vocab word from English, WOOO!)
    Lovin' it.