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Mommy Plz Love Me

i am sorry i am who i am
i cant change anything about me
i cant change the way i look
or how i feel about you
i cant change how i want to die
or how i want to cut myself
i really want you to love
me and i dont want u to get rid of me
i love u mommy cant u c
it hurts me to know you dont want me here anymore
all my tears run down my face and hit the concrete floor
all i want is to be your little girl again
and be everything you wished for

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  • Beautiful-N-Broken gold member
    November 10
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    This is so sad. I hope your mom knows how you feel, if not you should really tell her. Because I'm sure she doesn't want to lose you either. Great write hun!