ocean waves crashing
threateningly against me
i whisper "take me"
Author notes
did you want more than i haiku, or is this enough?
A contest entry
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what do you think?
Comments
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The winds call to you in your haiku, and the lure of the sea and more. Lots of thoughts flow through your haiku. Thank you so much for your pirate-ku.
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I've never mastered the whole art of the haiku but this is truely striking! Great Job!
-Katie
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thank you. i thought it was pretty good too :P
there is one on your home page that is very good, so i don't know where you get off saying "you've never truly mastered the whole art of haiku" -
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I don't know. So tiny some peopel got it. You definatly got it lol
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