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this pain i feel is more than real

all i feel is  pain
i feel no love from you
i hate this feeling i truly do
i want u to love me more than anything
i hate my life
i hate myself
i want it fixed
please dont send me away again
do you truly not want me anymore
i dont know what to do
if i died would you be happy
i will take my life if you want me to
all i want is for you to be happy
and for the the pain to stop that i go through

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