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Butterflies!

That day I keep reliving
Those butterflies so unforgiving.
Seeing you for the first day
that I could so happily say
you were mine.

Under control and not,
This feeling can’t be bought.
When I glance in your direction
And seeing that affection
In your eyes.

When you hold my hand,
These butterflies, I can’t stand.
They make it hard to think,
Thoughts don’t completely link,
And I end up a fool.

But never could I seek
To find another so unique
As you,
Because I knew
Butterflies mean something.

Fool, I may be.
But I would never choose to flee
From your arms.
And all your many charms,
As long as these butterflies remained.

They remind me each day
That I wouldn’t fade away
As long as you saw me
With that occasional glance.

Author notes

Yeah, this one is pretty self-explanatory. I wrote it when my boyfriend asked me out for the first time. I was extremely happy and I didn't think it was possible then but I'm a lot happier now after 9 months. He is my world and I love him a lot. <3 Oh, and this is the first poem that I have ever written that's ryhmed. I felt quite accomplished. Haha

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