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autumn dawn

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stagnant water
half frozen in autumn dawn
the last geese loiter

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes





Art: "Geese and Reeds in Snow ", 1912
Ohara Koson (1877-1945)

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  • just mercedes gold member
    November 8
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  • Everwind Rising
    November 8
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    Yes, this is good. "Loiter" when I read that I instantly wished that I had thought of it. Perfect.

  • Rowan gold member
    November 7
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    you knew, I'd get this. Love loiter.
    Excellent.


    • DogFish silver member
      November 7
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      Glad the autumn theme didn't discourage you too much!

      • Rowan gold member
        November 7
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        shite, didn't see it was for this one... wtf's with stagnant, frozen,
        and now, fuck...
        dislike loiter too.


        • DogFish silver member
          November 7

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          It did say "humble friends"...
          what's more humble than a goose in a frozen swamp!?

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