stagnant water
half frozen in autumn dawn
the last geese loiter
Author notes
Art: "Geese and Reeds in Snow ", 1912
Ohara Koson (1877-1945)
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Yes, this is good. "Loiter" when I read that I instantly wished that I had thought of it. Perfect.
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you knew, I'd get this. Love loiter.
Excellent.
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Glad the autumn theme didn't discourage you too much!
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shite, didn't see it was for this one... wtf's with stagnant, frozen,
and now, fuck...
dislike loiter too.
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It did say "humble friends"...
what's more humble than a goose in a frozen swamp!? -
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a person with a bic.?
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That sounds like me, too!
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a zip works better in the wind though... lol.
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