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My Addiction

Seeping into my very soul,
fusing, melting into me,
your essence has become
my opiate ~

  and you, my addiction.


When I am with you,
my soul soars to highest highs --
and when we're apart,

  "missing you"
    is puting it nicely...


The love you've shown me
has become that which
sustains my heart,

  ~ is it any wonder
    that I crave you at all times?


Some may consider me
hopeless,
incapable of any recovery,

but, to be honest,

  ...why would I want to?


My Love,

from the moment we met,
I knew I was hooked ~

  and I've no need for any other.

 

 

 

 

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  • ShaShay
    November 8
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    Beautiful tribute to a lover. How lucky you are to have that inspiration. I have been there once in my life. I long to be there again. Congrats on a beautiful piece.
    Sharon


  • DecorusApparatus
    November 7
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    Lovely, I really like how you made the prompt into something so sweet. I was impressed by the phrasing of this and you made it into a really nice poem. Thank you for your entry.
    --Katie


    • Xianaria gold member
      November 8
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      For me, she is my sweet addiction
      Thank you for giving me a good prompt inwhich I could share this with her.

      ~ Tim