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Time

Missing image
yesterday became today
when we weren’t looking
and today will be tomorrow
whether we are ready or not

living our life for those moments
that a clock cannot capture
making the most of that space
between the clock ticks

in less than a heartbeat
we fall in love
a child is born
and people die

all of this happens while we wait
for the next minute
the next day or month
our lives slip away

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  • debilynn gold member
    2 days ago
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    a superb writing! an enjoyable read that is so true to life. you can't ignore it for it's always there. you are very insightful. a wonderful poet! thank you for sharing this. keep writing! God bless you always

  • Angel-Of-Sorrow
    November 11
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    love it. its really good. your a great poet.

  • goalsv
    November 8

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    Such a true poetic look at life, revealing the joy and heartache that comes with this vapor we call life.


  • nilav
    November 7

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    time is the most powerful thing in this world....things happen and we are just onlookers...you have expressed it very well