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You Old Hearted Jerk

Bitter thoughts-
Hurtful words
From times past.
There he is-
Avert your eyes,
Pretend that you don't care.

My fists are clinched,
In my thoughts you are always-
Tormenting
Taunting
Cornering
My heart.

Hold my breath I do-
As your voice rings in
My ears.
Hold my breath I do-
As your smile fills
My eyes.
My heart beat is all over
My body.

Can you hear it?
Can you hear my thoughts of
I hate you?
Because I do.

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prompt: What was you state of mind yesterday at 3:00 PM?

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  • Sweet-Pea7
    November 8
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    This is... hmm. I like it. I'm just not sure what it is though.


    • Baisi
      November 8
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      It was this prompt we got in Creative Writing Club. Write a poem about the state of mind you were in when you got out of school on Thursday. And this was mine.


  • MacyDawn
    November 7
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    Whoa. Thats deep.
    "you old hearted jerk!"
    yeah, its a good poem.