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Haiku 3

Colours shoot across,
breaking the bland sky in half.
Where's the pot of gold?

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  • Swan song gold member
    November 21
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    i have often asked myself that question wouldn't it be nice if we could find one lol i would be chasing rainbows all the time lol


  • Black Narcissus gold member
    November 8
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    If you ever find it I'll go 50/50.

    Nicely written.