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Alone

Forgotten, Abandoned, Alone
Looking on from the outside
Never from inside
The tenderness and gentleness
Never to be known,
Merely observed
She wonders
Is it her fault?
All the mistakes
All the fights
Did she deserve this?
Was she the cause?
Others so joyful
Carefree
She’s stressed out
Always ashamed
She pushed them away
Now they’ve moved on
They’re gone
Loving each other
Forgetting one other
She no longer wonders
She knows
It’s her fault
Too many mistakes
Too many fights
She deserved worse
She caused more
Alone, Abandoned, Forgotten

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  • friends are nice


  • black-waters
    November 7
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    This is really good. Very emotional. And im always here for you when you feel alone my dear.


    • FadingObsession
      November 7
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      thank you hun. I know you are. I owe you so much. Thanks for always holding me up when my world came crashing down around me.