I'm falling down,
To the point of no return.
Once I hit I'll never come back.
But isn't this why I did this?
Who knows,
Who cares.
Not me I know that.
I used to long ago,
but now,
I feel nothing...
The only thing I felt for so long was hate.
I don't know what I did wrong.
So everytime I'm told a compliment,
It's hard to get used too,
It makes you think that they're up to something.
I'll never be told I love you,
And completely understand.
Who knows,
I'm so screwed up that I wouldn't even date myself.
This is why I'm falling,
Plummeting to my death,
But was my life worth It?
Did I jump for no reason?
Well It's too late to turn back now,
Never ending falling torwards my death
Author notes
Like I care? Anywayz, this how I feel sometimes.. Sometimes not. Oh well.
How did I do? and How good?
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I love the line that says "I'm so screwed up that I wouldn't even date myself." Sometimes I can relate to that. I mean don't get me wrong I'm a wonderful person but pretty screwed up lol. I really like this poem alot. You do a great job expressing yourself!!! Your poetry seems very down to earth and not sugar coated. Like you tell it how it is. Granted I've only read two of your poems but still lol. I enjoy your writes thus far!!! Just wanted you to know!!!
Sincerely,
Sarah
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This is so sad and it hurts me to see that you can feel this low. I have no clue all that is in your head, but I do know what your friendship means to me. I hope that you never ever get this low, I dont want to lose you. This was a really good way to get your feelings out. SH
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Line 2: It would sound better if you said "To the point of no return."
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Thanks. I just changed It.
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