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Silence Let It End

I spilled my life to you.
every dark secret, the haunting moments, my soul-
I never had a listener like you.
(you know me better than I know myself).

        this is me letting you in.

I spilled my heart to you.
risking our bond, stopping memories, losing you-
I never imagined it being possible.
(until your silence forced me to say Goodbye).

        this is me letting you go.

Author notes

he is still my best friend,
even though our bond is broken.

enjoy.

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  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    November 8

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    Wonderfully penned. Easy for me to relate to as well. It speaks loudly of many emotions that play a role in heartache. Fantastic job. Thank you for entering my contest, best of luck. ~gypsy~


  • The cliche typo
    November 7

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    awwwwwww

    I spilled my heart to you.
    risking our bond, stopping memories, losing you-
    I never imagined it being possible.
    (until your silence forced me to say Goodbye).

    this is me letting you go.

    favorite (half) hahah
    this is so sad! (i may steal this form later... HA like i could work this, you did great!

    until your silence forced me to say Goodbye- this was my favorite line, i dont know why i dont know much about poetry, it just was awesome haha