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I Hate Feeling Like This

I hate feeling like this.
Alone and cold in my own skin.
The pounding of my heart
As meal time closes in

I hate feeling like this
So selfish and uncaring
So much money, time, and tears
Spent for my well being

I hate feeling like this
Unbeautiful, gross, and fat
But I can't see myself any other way
The voices won't allow that

I hate feeling this way
But I can't let it go, not yet
I have to hold on tighter
Till my demands are met

Because I'm alone and cold
Because I'm selfish and uncaring

Bust mostly,

Because Im unbeautiful, gross, and so damn fat

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