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Steed

Flowing white mane
In the shimmering moonlight
As bright as day
In the middle of the night

For a beautiful poem
I feel the need
But can't get my mind off
Of two horny steed

I want to write it pretty
But will feel no remorse
Cause I can't Quit thinking
Of two horny horse

From the picture
The poem should be so grand
But can't stop typing
Can't control my hand

I'm so sorry
Feeling forlorn
For a beautiful poem
Try horses without the horn

Author notes

Sorry, couldn't get it off my mind

A contest entry

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  • Rheea gold member
    November 22
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    Been around real horses too long have you cowboy? I had to laugh out loud.


  • condor gold member
    November 12
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    lol!!!!!!!!Now you have taken a different angle on this picture and it really gave me something to smile about. Love the rhythm and the rhyme and congratulate you on your quite wonderful sense of humor. Thank oyu so much for entering and I wish you the very best in the contest.