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rainbow haiku




 

 

crowned from misted dust
prismatic arch soars skyward
nature's beauty formed




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  • Swan song gold member
    2 days ago
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    The first two lines are excellent and i enjoyed those thank you for participating


  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    November 8

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    Marv!

    This is the perfect description of a rainbow in Ku form. 5/7/5 in elegant formation! All the best in the contest. This is a winner for me.

  • SoulWhispher
    November 7

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    Well penned description of a rainbow, it speakes with th voice of nature, one can only say great job, blessings John

  • JToddUnderhill
    November 7

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    Nice....

    ...... Not normally into Haiku but this one was not too bad!