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Whimsical Holiday Tale,

A whimsical tale; holiday tale,
A sanctitude holiday nearing me with azaleas,
Those happy days clouded in my heart.
Rejoicing over past memories
And future is on the stand.

Holidays unveil the rusty rhapsody;
Kept with myself-
In roaring silence and as wide asunder.
I am tired of feeling lonely and alone,
I want all pieces quilt around me.

I want my family is that too much to ask?
I really don’t think it’s an impossible task.
My heart is no longer a happy one.
No more fun, no more laughter,
Until we meet on moor top to speak volumes.

And its last day as holiday, a fragile remorse
With penance for lost moments without delight;
As the cold gives its way,
The warmer days peeks in.

A contest entry

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  • Kendal Palmer gold member
    November 8

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    This is a great entry for the contest!! Good luck. I enjoyed it very much. You have a really unique style of writing. keep that ink flowing!!
    peace and light,
    Kendal


  • A63-Angel
    November 7
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    stunning! you described how I have been feeling so beautifully. nicely done and thank you for entering.