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Haiku 211

Missing image
the proud peacock flaunts
his fanlike tail to entice
a future partner

Author notes

acknowledging image help from Google

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  • Swan song gold member
    1 day ago
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    a wonderfully full sized haiku here but i see no color in the haiku or they ocelli in the tail over all this is a well structured poem owever and I thank you for entering